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Thursday, September 8, 2016

How to create an interesting paragraph, Instead of a sloppy paragraph

Wednesday 29 june 2016 week 9 term 2

Rewrite this paragraph in the past tense.

Midas then starts up and runs about the room.
He seizes the bed the bed post and it  becomes a golden pillow. He touches the pillow and it turns to gold. He is so surprised that he can scarcely believe his own eyes.

Interesting paragraph- Midas then started up and ran about the room. He saw the bed post and it became a golden pillow. He touched the pillow and it turned to gold. He was so surprised that he could scarcely believed his own eyes.

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